Initial Feedback

In order to get this feedback we played our rough cut on a big screen in front of our classmates and teacher. They wrote down what they thought was good about it, and what they thought could be improved.




The main piece of feedback that came through from our classmates and teacher was that we had too many gaps in the video, which we were definitely aware of before the screening! Most people thought that the argument scene were we used a lot of fast cuts was well edited, however our teacher noticed that we had broken the 180 degree rule, something which we have to fix in the next 2 weeks.
The main scene that everyone seemed to like was the very end scene at the graveyard which we desaturated to make black and white. The feedback was that the imagery went well with the tone and pace of the music and story at that point. The scene where we created a shadow so we can see the girl pick petals of the rose went down well with our teacher, who said that we need to incorporate the rose into the video more.